I saw you once…I had to see you again !
Thank God! God exists.
For there you stood, already driving me insane !
Shamelessly, I stood in the middle of the rink,
My eyes riveted on yours, as I let others glide past.
I couldn’t miss as much as even your blink.
My heart was, by now, beating like a well wound toy.
I had to talk to you !
I needed help.May be even a ploy !
Alas! I had taken too long…you were walking away.
I remained there, Stunned.Striken.Helpless.
Even as my eyes blatantly refused to sway.
It was not meant to be.I needed no sign.
When I looked into your eyes,
I knew they will never find their way back to mine.
Then you vanished completely, confirming my worst fears,
Leaving me in an eternal trance,of which
It’s just been nine years.
How I wish our eyes had locked !
How I wish we had a mutual friend !
How I wish…we had a different end !
K.Pawan Kumar said,
November 27, 2008 at 4:46 am
Thanks! AB 87 & AaR for editing and the title respectively!
Aadith said,
November 27, 2008 at 4:52 am
Bravo!!! Magnifique!!! Molto Bene!!!!
dodi2all said,
November 30, 2008 at 8:05 pm
Not bad , not bad at all.. Keep them coming..
Lipi said,
December 14, 2008 at 7:14 pm
Really impressive ……keep it flowing